Hi room 7 I hope Mrs Eeles can make it this term, if she doesn't I hope she can have a fast recovery.
I am Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Mr Ogilvie and Mr Wong.
Sunday, 20 September 2015
Thursday, 17 September 2015
Thinking groups - Week 9
This is my thinking on week 9. In our thinking groups we have taking away numbers and adding up numbers
Friday, 11 September 2015
My Argument on letting people go into the forest
Should we let people into the forest?
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Introduction
State what you are arguing about
State your opinion
For or Against
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My argument is about people going into the forest. I am against people going into the forest because something dangerous might happen to them. A forest has lots of trees and they grow on mountains and in valleys. They can leave behind lots of rubbish and when they protect the forest they don’t look after it because they leave rubbish and somethimes things.
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Reason 1
Safety
Supportive details
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If we let people into the forest they could get lost, parents would be worried, and they would call the police. The police are very busy arresting people and taking guns off people and taking them to the police station to stop what they are doing and go to rescue some people that got themselves lost. If people were in the forest too long they would start to get sick and they might die because they didn’t have medicine
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Reason 2
Camping
Supportive details
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If people bring some snacks like a muesli bar, chocolate, chips and cookies they leave rubbish lying around into the forest. Possums and rats can eat rubbish that have been left onto the ground and that would bring lots more of them and rats are not good because they might give rabies to the other animals. If the rubbish is left on the ground sometimes the fire can come onto the rubbish and if someone thxrows a bottle on dry grass it can cause fire and the fire can go all over the place. If it goes all over the place. Also they can have cigarettes and chuck it on the ground and that can cause fire.
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Reason 3
Health
Supportive details
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If we go into the forest sometimes there could be wild animals - while you are sleeping. The wild animals are mosquitoes, wild pigs, deers wild boars, rats and possums.
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Conclusion:
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I think that people should not go into the forest and they can make danger fire, getting lost and leaving rubbish lying around.
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Friday, 4 September 2015
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