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This is my blog post. I like stomp because it is cool.

Revising Writing

Today i have been learning about the the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each Letter of this word means something is writing. Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands for delete. In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in witch we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing. Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

 

               My

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Miss Paton has a cat called Oscar. He is a tabby cat and can be a pain. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always likes to come home stuving. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my furniture. He doesn't like my laptop computer. He would sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him a attention.

Taking Care of Ourself

This is how i take care of my self. I also have been brainstorming word to take care.

What we learnt in music

In dance we learnt the twist,curved,angular and stretched shapes. We needed to choose 1 brother from the beginning and choose 4 shapes. Then we needed a partner. The moves I like was the hand dance.

This is my work using google docs